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11:27 AM
[ Natsuki's been doing a lot of thinking after her first mission. The fact that they failed has put a lot of things into perspective, and so she decides it's time to write a poem.
... Well, re-write one, to be specific. The general meaning here seems appropriate, but it seems like a nice touch to change the words around a little bit to better suit the audience. Not that there was anything wrong with the original, of course. Why would you imply that?
In any case, one evening after they've returned to the not-so-much-on-the-moon Moon Base, a picture of some writing in a notebook appears on the network. ]
[ It's rather short, isn't it? She chooses to offer no explanation, at least up front. ]
... Well, re-write one, to be specific. The general meaning here seems appropriate, but it seems like a nice touch to change the words around a little bit to better suit the audience. Not that there was anything wrong with the original, of course. Why would you imply that?
In any case, one evening after they've returned to the not-so-much-on-the-moon Moon Base, a picture of some writing in a notebook appears on the network. ]
[ It's rather short, isn't it? She chooses to offer no explanation, at least up front. ]